The Basics of Writing an Online Slave Dance
1. Try to keep your dances between 10 - 15 posts long. Too few posts, and the dance will seem to be over before it ever really started; too many, and you lose the attention of the audience. You want the Masters and Mistresses to enjoy the dance, not to have it work as a sleeping potion.
2. Make sure that your posts are detailed enough. You want the watcher to “see” what you are doing in their mind’s eye. Paint the picture. A one or two line post is not going to paint the picture of an elaborate dance.
3. A Gorean slave dance is more than just words. You are painting a picture of the essence of your character by showing your emotions, your thoughts, your desires, your needs, your devotion, and your slave belly. Make sure your audience can feel the music in your movements.
4. Dance is not masturbation set to music. A dancer can be passionate but also feminine. You may indeed glimmer, moisten, glisten, sheen, shimmer, or any other word you wish to use to indicate your arousal… BUT there is much more to dancing than that. Elegance, grace, beauty, and sensuality can all be shown without being crude.
5. Make it realistic. It is always recommended that you actually try the movements you write to make sure they are physically possible. Role-play is fantasy, but let’s not make the audience roar in laughter at the impossible!
6. If your dance is pre-written, allow time between each post. Don’t speed-post. Give your audience time to read or even to comment upon your words. Masters like to interact and ogle together; give them time to do so. Reading your post after you submit it should give you an idea of an appropriate amount of time between posts. This will also allow you to make changes when necessary. Sometimes spontaneously responding to one Master or another makes for a more memorable and exciting dance!
7. Is there a theme to your dance? Traditional Gorean dances have a theme. Establish this theme for your audience rather than leaving them wondering what you are doing. Keep in mind that slave dance is a huge emotional outlet. You can dance because it fits your mood, so long as this mood is clearly expressed in your dance and establishes the theme.
8. Consider using props. The use of a prop such as a chain or a whip often adds a special flair to slave dance and may greatly influence its theme. For example, a slave girl who makes use of a whip may conclude her dance by assuming the position of kneeling to the whip. Remember to ask permission for the use of your owner’s property, whether it be an elaborately bejeweled length of chain or an unadorned twist of rope!
9. PLEASE, please check your spelling! If you are unsure of a word, please ask someone or use a dictionary. It takes so much away from your dance if your audience spends their time trying to figure out what language you are speaking -— and it makes your hard work look sloppy and carelessly written.
10. Most importantly: don’t copy another person’s dance! Watch and learn from others, perhaps even let another’s dance inspire you, but don’t ever cheat your fellow slaves or yourself by passing off another’s work as your own.
—Created by siren {RgR}
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